From: Tim Osborn <t.osborn@uea.ac.uk>
To: Øyvind Paasche  <oyvind.paasche@bjerknes.uib.no>
Subject: Re: Final checks on figures and captions Email 1 of 2
Date: Fri Sep 15 12:01:00 2006
Cc: Keith Briffa <k.briffa@uea.ac.uk>, Eystein Jansen <Eystein.Jansen@geo.uib.no>, Jonathan Overpeck <jto@u.arizona.edu>

   Hi Oyvind,
   I was off work yesterday so I couldn't check the tables until today.  Keith and I have
   spotted some corrections that need to be made, some my mistakes and some due to other
   changes.  Sorry!  Anyway all are shown as tracked changes (plus explanation comments) in
   the attached file.  Hope this is all clear and ok.
   Cheers
   Tim
   At 17:02 13/09/2006, Øyvind Paasche wrote:

     tim - that's very good, the minor error in box fig.1 is now corrected. I think the lines
     in fig.6.10 and 6.14 are sufficiently thick so if its up to me we'll leave them as they
     are. I believe that all the figures are incorporated into the Word file the same way and
     I can't see any big difference between 6.10 and 6.14. TSU have eps formats of all the
     figures and in the end they will probably use an entirely different program than Word to
     construct the report, so I guess there's nothing to worry about.
     Anyway, I have cleaned the standing version of the tables (attached) and if you (and/or
     Keith) could go through them a last time and check that everything is as it should be
     that would be nice. I have one question concerning one of the refs in table 6.2: Does
     Bertrand et al., 2002b correspond to
     Bertrand, C., M.F. Loutre, M. Crucifix, and A. Berger, 2002b: Climate of the last
     millennium: a sensitivity study. Tellus Series a-Dynamic Meteorology and Oceanography,
     54(3), 221-244.
     Cheers,
     Øyvind

     Hi,
     I've checked that the figures and captions are the final versions and they are all
     correct for figures 6.10-6.14.
     I've also checked Box 6.4, Figure 1 and here there is an error with the caption.  The
     caption ends with the reference period which currently states '...the period 800-1995."
     I got this wrong.  The correct statement is "...the period 1001-1980."
     Sorry about that (it was a mistake carried over from our earlier use of the figure from
     Osborn and Briffa, 2006, Science: for that paper we did use 800-1995).
     Were you also after a check of the image quality?  The figures I'm involved with all
     look pretty good, except that 6.10 is a bit blurry or lower quality.  Was it inserted
     into Word in a different way to the others that might have degraded the image?  Also, I
     wonder whether I should make the lines on Figure 6.10(b) and/or Figure 6.14(b) any
     thicker?  Please let me know if you want me to do this.
     Cheers
     Tim
     At 01:46 13/09/2006, Jonathan Overpeck wrote:

     Hi all - We're editing main text, and we think we're close to the right length without
     having to make significant cuts beyond what you've seen already - it's mostly down to
     editing for consistent style and clarity. That's good news.
     Øyvind recently sent (working very late over their) the attached figs and caption files
     (being sent in two files to keep each half under 10 Mb), and rather than Peck trying to
     figure out if it's all perfect, we're sending to YOU look at your figures and captions
     to make sure they are the most up-to-date versions. Thanks! It's a challenge to make
     sure we have all the most recent pieces, although we're betting that we're doing ok.
     Tomorrow (I hope - thanks Øyvind!) we'll send tables - hoping Tim, Keith, and Fortunat
     will be waiting to comment/edit if needed.
     We're in much better shape than last cycles thanks to all your hard work - hope we can
     make this last bit easy for you. We appreciate you working fast when we send material.
     Thanks, Peck and Eystein
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